development of our idea

1. black screen and silence for about 3 second

2.black screen and a heart beat for 5 seconds

3.setting the scene, a long shot of addenbrookes to show she is in a hospital and some credits on the objects such as a lorry driving past

4.black screen with a heart beat again 5 seconds

5. point of view someone blinking, either by using letter box tool on imovie or using something infront of the camera to give the eye blinking effect, or if this is too difficult we will film the eye opening and then go to the persons point of view.

6.as the eyes opening we get a buzz of noise, which is not clear, and the vision i snot blurred, which looks like she is laying in a hospital bed.

7. going back to the heartbeat with black screen for a few seconds

8.a shot of her face, fragmentated such as show her eye then her nose then show her damaged ear and zoom out on the radio something playing that reminds her of on the swing singing, which sends her to a flash back.
9.flash back in black and white and possibly put it in slow motion as well to show that it is a flash back, and film in the woods show the swings

10. panicking running through a woods but the music still being heard on the radio.

11. go back to the radio rather than her singing and then she sits up in the bed in shock and comes really close to the camera.

we are going to put the credits into our shots because we think this is very different and looks very good and gives us more chance to show more shots.

2 swings flashback possibly, one in the woods and one in a modern park

we have got permission to use the health and social bed which is like a hospital bed for our filming.